Wednesday, May 8, 2013

"Elephant" Poems in Natural History


Dan Chiasson’s Natural History is a book of poems that explores the depths of the human mind and imagination in several different manners. Chiasson uses several literary references in his work, sometimes even writing from the perspective of his subjects, for example his poem “Randall Jarrell,” which he writes in Jarrell’s first person perspective, and even refers to himself, Dan, in the third person (“I’ve never  written in a way that really pleases Dan.”) Chiasson plays with these senses of perspective and voice a lot in this collection. What I found most interesting was his poems from the perspective of a circus elephant.
Much of Chiasson’s inspiration for Natural History came from Pliny the Elder’s Historia Naturalis, an ancient early encyclopedia which is said to contain all the ancient knowledge. In it, Pliny reports an observation of an elephant, which Chiasson includes in Natural History as a stand alone poem in itself:

It is known that one elephant, who was
rather slow in learning his tricks and
had been punished severely by his
master’s beating, was discovered later
that night, alone in his tent, practicing
those tricks.

                                                —Pliny,
                  Natural History, Book VIII
                                                                       
Chiasson uses this text, presenting it in its raw form, showing the incredible human quality to it, and to this animal and its emotional insecurities. Who even knew an animal had such depth? Chiasson plays on this, creating a voice and a perspective for the elephant in his three “ The Elephant” poems—or what Kay Ryan refers to in the New York Times Book Review, as “a creature who seems to be half man and half elephant.” The first elephant poem contains the lines, “People connect me with sadness/and often, rationality” and “We elephants are the images of humility,” which I, being an elephant lover, identified with. Where Chiasson really creates, however, is when he flips these images on their heads, and reveals an intense self-awareness within these creatures, particularly in the beautifully disturbing last two last two stanzas, in which he discusses their “melancholy migrations to die:”

            Worn out by suffering, we lie on our great backs,
                        tossing grass up to heaven—as a distraction, not a prayer.

            That’s not humility you see on our long final journeys:
                        it’s procrastination. It hurts my heavy body to lie down (26).

Here Chiasson presents this depth of self—the self being such a complicated, contradictory and sometimes irrational thing—and assigns it to this creature who is so often associated with selfless rationality.
            The third “Elephant” poem discusses the death of the elephant, of which the speaker thinks, “Better to die/this way than in obscurity, on the empty plain” (45).  It seems that there is a concern of purpose here, of which this speaker, the elephant is lacking (“my body a sack of garbage, hooves bound, the world turned upside down”) in a very human anxiety. The elephant becomes but a celebratory decoration in his death—an ornament around which to gather the fruits of entertainment—but wasn’t he always?
            I had a harder time with the second “Elephant” poem, particularly the intercutting of the human parts about the department party and the masturbation. I thought that detracted from the tone that Chiasson had been creating, by imagining this hidden psyche and revealing to us these anxieties and griefs through the elephant’s eyes.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Shannon! This is a great response to Natural History. I think that what you harped on most in this response is something I thought about while reading all of the elephant pieces-- they were all so compelling, but I wasn't entirely sure why. I realized later on after re-reading them that what made those poems the most moving was the fact that the elephants were given the most human qualities possible. They felt humiliation, shame, embarrassment, pain that people aren't usually exposed to.

    Being exposed to it, not just from a "normal" third-person perspective but from a first-person perspective is probably the most interesting aspect of Chiasson's work as a whole. I find it amazing that he so effectively writes in the first person and even refers to himself in the third person, like you mentioned. I think that after having read this, I might try and write something similar, but I doubt it will be as powerful as the writing in Natural History.

    The second elephant poem was definitely interesting, and I can see how all of the different elements of the poem could have been really distracting. I'm sure that it'll be brought up in class tomorrow so hopefully we'll be able to shed some light on that piece!

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  2. I loved how you tied all of the elephant poems and imagery together. I thought that you did a great job of summarizing the poems themselves without missing the essence of the poems or the key points/lines in each poem. You tied them together in a clear, accurate manner, which I thought was really impressive. What stood out to me most about your review of/take on Natural History was when you said,
    “Where Chiasson really creates, however, is when he flips these images on their heads, and reveals an intense self-awareness within these creatures, particularly in the beautifully disturbing last two stanzas, in which he discusses their “melancholy migrations to die.’”
    When I read these poems I had been reading them and thinking of the narrator as a “creature who seems to be half man and half elephant.,” and focusing more on the man than the elephant. But I liked how you bring out and emphasize the elephant ‘half’ of the man in your review and bring the readers attention to the imagery and the author’s particularly creative use of perspective, which I think is a large part of why this book was so incredible. You actually pointed out my single favorite poem in your response, which, oddly enough, is Pliny’s elephant observation. There is something about that poem that, out of all the poems in Natural History, made me really think about that which we do not know, more so than in the more fantastical way he did in his other poems. That poem, as you said, made me think of the depth of emotion in all creatures.

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  3. I disagree with you about the second Elephant poem. I thought these scenes added to the sad picture of this elephant's existence that the other two poems further. While it was my least favorite of the three, I felt it fit into the theme of the trilogy. I think these poems are about frustrations and that the masturbation references added sexual frustration to the physical and emotional frustration that the other two contributed.
    I agree with what you said about Chiasson. He inserts himself in the poems as a way of expression the feeling that he is feeling. Another thing I liked about the poems were that size and body image were such prevalent issues. While being bigger is a desirable quality for a human man, the elephant sees it as a curse and a burden.

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