Tuesday, April 30, 2013

A Personal History Full of Images of Nature



Dan Chiasson’s Natural History proved an interesting read, especially in contrast to the historically fictional poems of Ellen Voigt’s Kyrie and David Roderick’s Blue Colonial. It’s almost ironic, then, that the word “history” would be part of the title of this collection of poems published in 2006. I find that “natural” definitely captures more of the essence of Chiasson’s poems than “history” does—unless, of course, we’re simply focusing on the author/speaker’s personal history, which seems to be the case here. I really liked the way Chiasson so heavily used imagery, often turning to the inspirational scenes of forests and rivers to express emotion in his verses, while sharing with us bits and pieces of his life, often even using his own name in poems such as “To Dan Chiasson Concerning Fortune,” “To Helena Concerning Dan Chiasson,” and “After Party,” to name a few.

I felt that “Purple Bush” was remarkably abundant in imagery and figurative language:

“The whiff of an extinguished candle
            will sometimes cause a miscarriage.
Eels must travel far upstream to where
            the river becomes a ribbon to spawn.
In that shallow water their babies risk
            exposure to the harsh midday sun.” (89)

These first three stanzas of “Purple Bush” work intensely with pictures from nature to weave a story of the unborn. The words themselves, whether heard aloud or in one’s mind flow so gently from the page, only facilitating the creation of this marvelous tapestry. Though he used a rather overused source of imagery, Chiasson was definitely right to use forests and rivers and wildlife as he did; without it his poems would have lacked the earthiness that brings his words to life.

One of Chiasson’s poems that really struck me was “The Elephant.” Though I don’t fully grasp the meaning of all of his short couplets, I could definitely relate to Chiasson’s experience of being (somewhat unfortunately) compared to Wallace Stevens and Randall Jarrell, even though in his mind he resembled more the great TS Eliot, “a man of Europe, a man of cultivation” (88). The juxtaposition of self-concept and public image here was brilliant in my opinion, especially when set in the midst of a metaphor in which Chiasson likens himself (and perhaps other writers as well) to an elephant, “an image of humility” later stripped of all pretenses with the words: “That’s not humility you see on our long final journeys: it’s procrastination. It hurts my heavy body to lie down” (88). Perhaps I was initially drawn to this specific poem because, since the cover of Chiasson’s book itself depicts an elephant, I amateurishly linked the two and gave this poem a special meaning over the ones surrounding it, but I did the metaphor very meaningful, and it made me wonder what kind of animals and what other writers I might liken myself to as a writer, or if I should also feel this strange link to elephants as my soul in animal form. 

I can safely say that I enjoyed Chiasson’s Natural History. Like him, I want to be able to successfully incorporate imagery in my poem and to find the exact words to fill the lines so that my words flow as effortlessly and gracefully as Chiasson’s did.

Works Cited

Chiasson, Dan. Natural History. Northumberland, England: Bloodaxe Books Ltd, 2006. Print.

1 comment:

  1. "Purple Bush" held a special place for me, also, as far as imagery goes. While I admittedly tend to lean toward nature images, this one was specifically beautiful. The lines you quoted were very interesting to me because we talked last week about how miscarriage can be a sign of stalling societies. These unborn are never un-unborn, to use a double negative. And the things that kill them aren't tangible, physical things, but superstition and the ripple-effect of the sun. No one is to blame for these deaths, but they are to be taken both as a matter of course and as a part of the tragedy that we call life. His use of eels instead of fish was also fascinating to me, because that image of a fish swimming upstream to spawn is so central to my own home. I wonder if he used the eel to mirror the "ribbon" of the water of a stream?

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